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Give Me a Reason!

Im Halfway there.

This blade is to my neck,

Do you even Care?

I want to cut my troubles,

Take them outta my skin.

I'm not playing anymore!

Release the monster within.

Im Laying broken on the floor,

But still the blood it shows.

How the scars you've made will never heal,

Im dying all alone.

Do you still think i am worthless ?

As you lay me down to rest.

No tears or mourning for the child

who was always second best
©2008-2010 ~CaptainFeiron
:iconcaptainfeiron:

Author's Comments

just another horror piece i cooked up :threaten: i always get like this when something pisses me off. :nod: it seems like a good way to vent my stress :chainsaw:


i know its not good.... but i thought i would post it anyway :no:


i hate my life right now :lonely:

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:iconannamari-annie:
omg this is sooo wow.....
this must be featured :wow:
its so so so deep and those words are shocking...
i luv the rythm it has when reading it XD

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Where melodies swingle
and colours won't fade......
:iconcaptainfeiron:
aww :glomp: im so glad you like it no one else seems to *stares at empty comment box* thanks again

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The Sharpest Lives are the Deadliest to Lead :evillaugh: ---My Chemical Romance "the sharpest lives" :explosion:
:iconannamari-annie:
awww dun say that, I'm sure many read it....is that they're lazy to write, haha that happens to me a lot....
especially on journals....believe it, i read aaaalll of them, but lazy to write XD
cheer up, i'm sure in some time there will be more people who will appreciate your work =D

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Where melodies swingle
and colours won't fade......

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